Amorous Amee-Revised-W
Steamy sultry summer night stirring thick air
Sweet honeysuckle scent spreads everywhere
It is moonlit night and I sit on the shore alone
Think about many a loves that have come and gone.
But only one image returns on this cool night
Amorous *Amee came to me as virgin fresh that night
I laid my head on her heaving breasts.
On her curvaceous waist were my hands.
Surely not to be missed, her lips were near
Night thro’ we made love without fear.
Between the dusk of September 30 night
We caught at a mood as it passed in flight.
And what with the dawn of night began
With the dusk of day was done;
For that is the way of woman and man,
When a hazard has made them one.
Till the early dawn of October first day,
We succeeded to bade it stoop and stay.
Goodbye sweat, sting and wavy air
Goodbye hot love and steamy night fair..
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This is a revised version of my poem Nectar on the soup. Amee, in Indian languages, means Nectar.
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Fourth Placement
Contest: Steamy Summer Love
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