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AMONGST THE TREES

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the bark remembers rain etched with paths the water chose a map of thirst quenched roots, a hidden language anchor the giants, a conversation of earth and patience. I am a visitor learning the grammar of branches, the poetry of shadows.
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Hind Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Beautiful!! "Water chose" I like that
Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 7:04 AM
A beautiful story of a tree
Meadows Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful!! The magic of nature!!
Gauthier Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Beautiful ~ I love the mystery of trees and how they can become grand and majestic.
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