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Among the Trees

sleeping dead,among the trees, a man was seen The hand daring to touch him first was hand of god,among the trees. Among the trees the man did stir But no eye saw and none did care but eye of god among the trees. Among the trees a man said: Help, a man did nod And gushed his blood But no one helped,nor hands of God,among the trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
You have a unique style Ebrahim. Trauma can be paralyzing. Keep writing my friend. Thank yo for your visit and kind words. Deb
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Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 3/29/2013 6:24:00 AM
thanks so much dear Deb for your kind comment. i sure will :) you keep the nice job too :)

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