Among the Trees

sleeping dead,among the trees,
a man was seen
The hand daring to touch him first was hand of god,among the trees.
Among the trees the man did stir
But no eye saw and none did care
but eye of god among the trees.
Among the trees a man said: Help,
 a man did nod
And gushed his blood
But no one helped,nor hands of God,among the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burch Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 2:47 PM
You have a unique style Ebrahim. Trauma can be paralyzing. Keep writing my friend. Thank yo for your visit and kind words. Deb
Sharifat Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:24 AM
thanks so much dear Deb for your kind comment. i sure will :) you keep the nice job too :)
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