Among the Neanderthal Part 2

The only other choice that the Neanderthals had 
was to retreat and to move on or they just might make us mad, 
and if we'd get mad, Neanderthal lives could be lost, 
If we wanted their territory, We'd just take it by force. 
The Neanderthals fate did not deserve to be received, 
at least that's the viewpoint I've chosen to believe. 
For 250,000 years 
they endured the harshest living conditions known to humankind, 
but another human specie was now encroaching 
and many more of them were not far behind. 
2% in either direction, 
be it higher birth or lower mortality rate. 
2% is the simple equation that decided the Neanderthal's fate. 
Had that simple 2% been attained by the Neanderthal, 
they'd be with us today. 
With our children theirs would play. 
They would have never become extinct at all,
but who is to say that if they survived to this day 
that we'd embrace them as sister and brother.
We've come so far since then as an advanced specie 
and yet look how horrible we treat one another.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 4, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Billy=-O Congrats. With your featured poem *Skat
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January 2, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Such a lot of truth here Billy; all it takes Somtimes I think; is a little to much superior attitude..! well done on the feature.."
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January 2, 2013 at 11:10 AM
Right you are, Silly Billy. Congrats on the selection. daver
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