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Among My Souvenirs

creased old love letters
many times read in silence-
gushed a stream of tears





November 18, 2020

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/4/2020 12:31:00 PM

Your creased love letters are so evocative of nostalgia and yearning, so much conveyed in such a petite form, well put!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2020 5:34:00 AM

Sad but how sweet to have them.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2020 8:35:00 AM

Very creative work with this one. Don't know if you placed by reading comments though. Maybe it hasn't been judged. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/13/2020 9:45:00 AM

Sad--but EXCELLENT, JCB! Janice

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/11/2020 5:14:00 AM

To my faves. Love, Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/11/2020 3:27:00 AM

Wow! Excellent Senrye, JCB.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2020 5:43:00 PM

Such feeling in this one, JCB. Sad and lovely.

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/10/2020 3:21:00 PM

Some things are meant to treasured forever. This is so beautiful and heartwarming... hugs

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2020 9:44:00 AM

Deeply sensitive and emotive..

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2020 4:50:00 AM

Love this sensitive and powerful write. God bless you dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2020 2:12:00 AM

- A treasure, JCB :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/9/2020 6:31:00 PM

JCB, such melancholy beauty streams from your emotive pen, the ink of tears spilled upon the wanting page. An emotional and expressive gem. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

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