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Amnesiac By Choice

endless sky brushes crimson strokes upon a cloudless Summer void sea soft to pastel blue benign robs shore of its sparkling treasure trees drip opaque tears 'pon sharp blades of velvet grass stood to attention queen bee summons dawn's light to blaze a trail across talc-ed pollen paths birds drift thermals as if hung to dry their new inked melodies whilst lovers lick chocolate from lips agape for breaths of fantasy at speakers corner atheists sing amen to politics' tarnished guilt as listeners turn a blind eye to memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/26/2016 7:44:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup, Emma :) - A great poem, well written :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Emma Green
Date: 4/28/2016 3:00:00 AM
How kind, many thank yous.
Date: 4/25/2016 7:52:00 PM
Hi Emma, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Emma Green
Date: 4/28/2016 3:09:00 AM
Many thanks for both your welcome and your review.
Date: 4/25/2016 2:19:00 PM
Hi Emma, Wow.... brilliant metaphors & amazing write.Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Emma Green
Date: 4/28/2016 3:10:00 AM
Thank you, Manmath Dalei.. your welcome and review are truly appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2016 11:46:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Emma. :)
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Emma Green
Date: 4/28/2016 3:19:00 AM
Many thanks for both your welcome and comment.
Date: 4/24/2016 10:19:00 PM
Emma, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Emma Green
Date: 4/28/2016 3:11:00 AM
What a generous comment, so very helpful and immensely sincere. Thank you, thank you!

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