Amiss

Do I miss you
Because
You're far?
Do I miss you
Because
It's been awhile?
Why do I miss
What do I miss
What what oh what
Is amiss?
Is it the absence
Of you?
The distance
Of you?
Am I night 
Missing the moon
The twinkling of stars
All the strangers around me
Not bright enough
To lure me out of the dark
Corners that I hide; that I lurk in?
Or am I grass
Missing the sun
The warmth
The fiery burn
Motionless too long
Without a light breeze?
Or am I the shore
Still feeling 
The splash 
Of your farewell
Long after
You've waved 
Goodbye?
APAD13 - 093
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 6:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 13, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Nestor David Armas, awesome poem, thanks for sharing. Always ~LINDA~
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July 27, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Nestor, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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