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Amidst the Waves

What have you done to me? Now I'm choking while I speak I'm finding my way out the hole you dug Explosions took me to a foreign place And I'm still amidst the waves What have you done to me? Now I'm choking while I speak They say it's always your fault so I'm grabbing my skin To let my dog bark They say it's always your fault so Im grabbing my skin To let my dog bark Now I'm broken and I'm soft and I'm exactly the way you like And I'm finding my way out All the angels locked out of heaven are dancing And we're dancing thanks to all the angels locked out of heaven So please excuse me for staying asleep through one more night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/3/2017 11:07:00 PM
Instead of trying to find your focus, I am happy just to read the words and imagine the circumstances under which you write. Your technique is quite the same in many pieces, a bit abstract, a bit humorous, a bit sorrowful. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us at PS, Nel K.
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Kara Gru
Date: 4/28/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for reading and kind words.

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