Amidst the Kids

among such hunger such an enchanted smile beams amidst the kids, she .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/28/2015 10:47:00 PM

:) Dino James, I love being with kids esp toddlers.. :)!//olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 2:23:00 PM

Oliz, that I can believe because you have a wonderful friendly personality, and even better, toddlers of your own, hugs//James xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2015 2:14:00 PM

I have just posted a Senryu about emotions - this haiku radiates happiness James and smiles are infectious:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 2:26:00 PM

You're so right Jan, it's so lovely to be in the company of someone who's radiant smile allows said person to smile for the first time in a long time, hugs//James xx