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Amidst summer

Heated months swim by Like the transparent waves Break on horizon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 6/29/2011 1:25:00 PM
Lovely haiku withnice images creating summer picture, John
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:24:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today John. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:44:00 PM
Very nice analogy!
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John Beam
Date: 6/29/2011 10:54:00 AM
thanks I have not been on here much glad you still onhere have good day