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Amidst Rustling Leaves

In an aura and its quintessence, Wakeful sunrise in periwinkle skies. Fresh intoxicating air Fly above in graceful pace. Velvet feel of delicate rose petals, Daffodils, scarlet marigolds, And waves of tiny blossoms; Sweet breathed buds have unfurled, Kiss of sweet nectar, Spring flowers bloom. Birch and aspen nesting birds Safely perch, amidst rustling leaves. Butterflies flit, bumblebees Emerging from nestled rest Amid pungent garden. Tiny wings dance To whisper of gentle breeze. 7/28/2020 Petal, buds, blossoms, bees, birds, butterflies! Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Silent One

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Date: 8/4/2020 10:03:00 AM
Such a beautiful and peaceful poem my friend.
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Date: 8/3/2020 5:59:00 AM
Tiny wings dance to whisper of gentle breeze. Extraordinary imageries with beautiful flowers and birds:-)Enjoyed your creative muse Eve mam:-) Congratulations on your win:-)Keep inspiring and excelling with your creative works:-)Take care.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/2/2020 3:29:00 AM
I am mesmerized by your captivating imagery of flowers and colours Eve. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful sights and sounds--great imagery. Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 8/1/2020 11:47:00 AM
- A lovely poem with many of my favorite flowers, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 9:48:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve, much enjoyed. Congrats. :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 8:35:00 AM
You included some lovely flowers in your poem... Lovely imagery.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/29/2020 10:20:00 AM
You have created a masterpiece with regular every day words, Eve. This is not easily done, and yet it appears as if you did this effortlessly. Bravo!
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Date: 7/28/2020 9:08:00 PM
Visually captivating Eve wonderful piece for the contest...
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:05:00 PM
Lovely images through out the write...Well done
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:46:00 PM
Well done. Excellent imagery. I haven’t heard the word periwinkle since I was a kid
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