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Amidst Potent Floods

Though thunderous noises besiege me And menacing flames threaten my being I will gaze upon wondrous works of creation And trust that I should not fear Amidst potent floods, I will stand Anxiety may hang thick as clouds above me And though I trod through dark, murky waters My feet, by God's grace, planted well For who keeps the ocean tucked in its bed? Who bids the caterpillar, sleep and sprout wings? If He cares so much for these creations There is no doubt, He cares for me! ~*~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2010 10:35:00 PM

Audrey, this was quite a worthy poem in the contest as well. My congratulations for a job very well done. LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

Date: 9/23/2010 6:38:00 AM

Such a strong sense of faith, such a show of genius in this write, well done my friend

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2010 6:17:00 AM

Man in the Moon it is Audrey. UPLIFTIng write ! Light & Love

John Rhinem

Date: 9/19/2010 5:26:00 PM

Smile ~ Towards the many "Blessed & Gifted "Psalmist of 'The Beautiful Biblicals Verse!!!'" ~ This is a fave which stirs my soul just as its author most surely does ~ "Extremely, 'Beautiful'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'Your Beauty Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Evenings 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey,' Aside 'The Still Waters of, Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/19/2010 5:18:00 PM

Smile ~ For to be as the wind which blows to & fro, would Never be my hearts wish nor its intent but, to love, is what I was born for; even amid all of my imperfections while wrapped amid this flesh, of a mere man; blessed although, as "You Yourself," I know I am...."I Love 'This Beautiful Poem;' Its Message, Its Strength, Its Hope &, Because It Holds 'You; The 'Most Beautiful Part of It All!!!'" ~ Smile, I also love its originality while amid its brightened parallel ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/19/2010 5:01:00 PM

Smile ~ "This Is Sooo Very Deep; Sooo Very Sweet &, 'Sooo Very Beautiful, Beautiful Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ I hope that life is finding "Your Beauty" amid the warmth of Summers serenity upon this eve dear &, I have thought a lot about "Your Beauty" since the last time which I visited "Your Treasures Poes" &, I believe amid a touch of jest I was having but a bit of fun with "Your Splendors" when I said a couple of things to "Your Beauty" within my coms at that time, my dear ~ ....Cont:)

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 11:59:00 AM

Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2010 3:44:00 PM

Well this is a number one winning poem Audrey my BBF... what a great entry and good luck... your words flow like a river dear and the theme is apparent in your lines of expression.. enjoyed..happy weekend...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 1:25:00 PM

Very creative with nice theme, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2010 12:08:00 PM

great thoughts my friend!

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 10:57:00 AM

Audrey a beautiful testimony on God's awesome timing and care for every little thing he created. Best of luck with this gem, love Wilma