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AMIDST MEDITATIVE SPACE

My essence rises beyond hills or feathers gliding, deepened by silence immense… where in peak of light anointed through soul – union; the grail of non-resistance widens through some boundless path, a haloed center; drifting on a meditative space unmapped by this world: I am at risk of a swarming flight into nothingness... shapeless, changeless: there's no finality in this total release, only a blaze of discernment greeting the god within, that in the absence of mind’s overtures an inner sanctuary divine wraps me, quiet while I become nothing but whole. .......................... Brian's Choice K Contest

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Date: 5/20/2020 5:21:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, NETTE: I like these contests Brian is doing now. It gives a chance for our older poems to be brought to light....if you are quick enough to enter ...they move fast Ha ha I enjoyed reading of your meditation and am thankful for the reminder to do it more often. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 6/15/2018 4:44:00 AM
Unveiling the mystic soul...Well written Nette
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Date: 6/14/2018 10:39:00 PM
Nette, This sounds like words from a thoughtful Moon-Angel :) Rarely are there answers of significance "out there".. truth is most often within. To the listener, the learner.. you can hear the whisper of the soul. Your perfect lines are an entertainer. They are also a teacher!
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Date: 6/14/2018 12:01:00 PM
Such a deep profound poem.. Great last line...
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Date: 6/14/2018 9:07:00 AM
“nothing but whole” what a great line. Thanks for your visit Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:34:00 AM
Clarity and self- awareness is found through deep reflection. The purity of this astounding write shows your depth.
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:32:00 AM
- A lovely poem Nette, good luck in the contest :) - Answers to your questions:- On the calendar, it is summer in Norway ... outside my window it's about 12 degrees, strong wind and heavy rain :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2018 6:36:00 AM
This is so nice Nette and I love the ending too :)
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Date: 6/14/2018 6:34:00 AM
Peaceful imagery in this reflective poem..contemplative journey to inner self--well done, nette..best for a win.
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