Amid Falling Leaves

Amid falling leaves, 
     Beneath the rasping trees,
          Nature sounds
               A little groggy with sleep. 

Proud and defiant wind 
     Puffs its lips 
          Out with its bad- 
               Temper breath. 

Leaves tussle with a few laps 
     Around not touching the ground. 
          A wink of Autumn amorous 
               Sweep through the coppice. 

Novice is the breeze 
     Alone reaching then 
          Once, twice, and thrice 
               Refusing to meet rustle shadows.   

Who can resist the deep, 
     Natural colors of deep earthy
          Toning melodic colors
               And green display?  

Caramel, lemon, crimson,
     And dark chocolate hues 
          Against a spectrum of light 
               And  freshen air of sweetness.

7/27/2020

Pick-A-Title, Vol 20 - Free Verse 3 - Poetry Contest
1. Amid Falling Leaves
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/5/2020 6:57:00 AM
Your colorful descriptions successfully described your lines. Congratulations, Eve.
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:04:00 AM
My eyes admiring your lovely presentation of a splendid poem.Loved the imageries Eve mam Nature sounds A little groggy with sleep~lines are adorable.:-) Congratulations on your win:-)Keep inspiring. Have a great day.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/5/2020 5:40:00 AM
Stunning write..awesome imagery..Congrats Eve on your TOP win!
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:20:00 PM
Eve this is stunningly fresh innovative writing. I really enjoyed it. Congrats for your win. Yours was another topic I considered writing on. He gives such beautiful topics to us, Edward does.
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Date: 8/4/2020 2:50:00 PM
Eve, I think you were there! Your Leaves creates a sense of drama, and of stark reality. 'Proud and defiant wind, puffs its lips' very much sinks the reader into the scene.
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:23:00 PM
Autumn is a rich season that I adore. Your muse paints a soothing picture of this beauty. Congratulations on your win Eve :)
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:22:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Eve:-) I love the format as well!
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Date: 8/4/2020 4:56:00 AM
Great piece, Eve, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:53:00 AM
Exquisitely done; your imagery uplifted me this morning as I read this poem, Eve.
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Date: 7/27/2020 10:37:00 PM
Wow...Splendid poetry.. What a beautiful entry!!! Good luck Eve...
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