Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Amid Dawn's Rise

beneath the glow
of sanguine skies
there's a shadow
by my side
standing
where you should be
as i watch the rise
unfolding this day

i linger
in the depths
of its hues
as i sip
on coffee
and thoughts
of you

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Caren Krutsinger December 25, 2019 at 3:25 AM The longing comes through like a sunbeam burst Sandra.

Gershon Wolf December 24, 2019 at 8:38 PM A write that's just right. Great to wake up to, with cream and sugar, please. Thanks, Sandy. :) gw Sandra Adams December 24, 2019 at 9:33 PM Thank you Gershon :) hugs

Running Wolves December 24, 2019 at 4:34 PM Another beautiful write Sandra Adams December 24, 2019 at 9:32 PM Thank you Robert... happy holidays my friend :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues December 24, 2019 at 7:55 AM A shadow by my side standing where you should be...a longing. Sandra Adams December 24, 2019 at 3:44 PM thank you Kim...my muse seems to like longing and sadder writes most.... hugs

Silent One December 24, 2019 at 5:16 AM Very romantic.. Sandra Adams December 24, 2019 at 6:22 AM Thank you my dear friend :) hugs

Ann Foster December 23, 2019 at 8:02 PM So sweet... somewhat solmn... I enjoyed my self and read it twice. Ann Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 9:23 PM Thank you my friend....glad you enjoyed yourself...have a wonderful evening... hugs

Frederic Parker December 23, 2019 at 4:23 PM in dim-lit realms of shade, a shadow is bound by love...quiet thoughts dear poet Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 7:47 PM Thank you so very much Frederic....have a wonderful evening :) hugs

Vijay Pandit December 23, 2019 at 4:19 PM If memories linger--might as well be under sanguine skies--beautifully sad, Sandy. Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 7:46 PM Thank you so much Vijay...i love the sky at sunrise and sunset... hugs

Alexis Y. December 23, 2019 at 3:07 PM Hi Sandra, You created such a poignant scene with this well written write. I could just picture the whole scene. Certain things can trigger a memory, you expressed how it can happen very well. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thank you so much Alexis... glad you could see the scene through my words... :) have a wonderful day ... hugs

Chris Green December 23, 2019 at 3:02 PM Simply beautiful. How do you do this, time after time, reach out and touch my heart with your words. Though this seems a bit sad I will take it as a happy poem because it made me happy to read it. :) Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 3:06 PM Thank you for such a sweet comment Chris...my muse always has a hint of sad with the beauty...it's just how my muse writes... glad it made you happy to read it... i am happy too, that you enjoyed it... hugs

Quoth Theraven December 23, 2019 at 2:59 PM Sandra, Brilliant write. I'm glad to find you sharing a cup in this poem 'amid dawn's rise'. I hope the morning shadow's memory last a lifetime. -Richard Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 3:00 PM Thank you so much Richard :) i hope you have a wonderful day my friend ... hugs