Amid Bewildered Core

Amid barking clouds death evanesced 
fighting grieving hesitantly inclining 
for justice keening for life moaning 
not obeying only persevering
quarrel remaining, soul tearing…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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De La Keur Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Very powerful write......Aleera
Smalling Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 11:07 PM
The power of rhyme merged in the rhythm here expanding this thing like a flower opening, God bless you again
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