Amid a High Tide

amid a high tide
cerulean sea waves
a restless fowl


01.12.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, MF - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
Flower Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:46 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Gregory. :)
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Moon,well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Flower Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Glad you enjoyed. Many thanks, Eve. :) Hugs!
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 2:16 PM
- A great haiku, Moon Flower :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:49 AM
Hello, Anne-Lise. Thank you for the nice words. Happy weekend, too. :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 10:18 AM
This haiku rolls - you can feel the movement and anxiety. Well done, Moon Flower.
Flower Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:52 AM
That was a great theme you held, Line. Thanks for the placement, :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Beautiful, Moon Flower. This is how I like to see a haiku done!!
Flower Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Andrea. :)
Smith Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Beautiful Moon Flower, best wishes in the contest...
Flower Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 12:52 AM
Thank you, Charlie. :)
Michael Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:04 AM
I like it..." A restless fowl " All the best
Flower Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Arturo. :)
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Great haiku...
Flower Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 3:12 AM
Thank you, SO. Too bad I missed your recent contest...
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