America's Mountain

When solitary quests for TRANQUILITY I thirst, Pikes Peak I will ascend.
Ah! The SPLENDOR of that majestic mount nothing will e'er transcend!
As I mosey amongst its rugged tors and its towering heights,
I marvel at the ELOQUENCE of God's magnificent sounds and sights!

The soothing WHISPER of gentle zephyrs WAFTING 'mongst the spruce,
Contrasts with the DULCET bugling for a mate by a pining moose!
The FRAGRANT scent of the LAVENDER bush is a bonus for my pleasure.
A stroll through the grandeur of such panorama I shall ever treasure!

The LILTING melodies of birdsong lighten my languid soul.
The melodic hymn of a rushing stream gladdens me as I stroll.
How could not the poet enraptured by such unsullied BLISS,
Capture the moment in flowing verse! - He would surely be remiss!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 6 in Word Warrior Challenge Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Robert! I know a winner when I see one...Peace, Audrey
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April 19, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Mighty well written- Congrats Robert
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Robert. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Lovely imagery in this entry for Andrea's contest Robert. I see why it is in the winner's circle. Congratulations!!!Blessings, Connie
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April 18, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 7:18 AM
You took these lovely words and climbed high. Congratulations. Joyce
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April 18, 2010 at 12:53 AM
Robert, congratulations on your sixth place win in my very first contest. You used the words wonderfully. LUv, andrea
Taylor Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Good cover, Bob and best luck in the contest. Very well written.
Haick Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for the ride on this fantastic trip, Robert!! I can only imagine the scenery that stretch out before you up there! Thanks for sharing this, my friend!! And thanks also for reading and leaving your much appreciated comments for me and Jimmy. ....Peace and love, audrey
Mehta Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 9:43 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nicely used the ten words.
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April 12, 2010 at 6:10 PM
good write!! enjoyed good luck in the contest!!
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Great write again and using the words just so...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Budd Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 3:01 PM
I agree with Carrie! I felt like I was there hiking up the mountain top. Great poem! The best of luck in the contest.
Richards Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 1:17 PM
I feel I am there in the captured moment of bliss....looking out across the Colorado sky!! Lovely poem, Robert! Good luck in the contest!! Love, Carrie
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