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America's Mountain

When solitary quests for TRANQUILITY I thirst, Pikes Peak I will ascend. Ah! The SPLENDOR of that majestic mount nothing will e'er transcend! As I mosey amongst its rugged tors and its towering heights, I marvel at the ELOQUENCE of God's magnificent sounds and sights! The soothing WHISPER of gentle zephyrs WAFTING 'mongst the spruce, Contrasts with the DULCET bugling for a mate by a pining moose! The FRAGRANT scent of the LAVENDER bush is a bonus for my pleasure. A stroll through the grandeur of such panorama I shall ever treasure! The LILTING melodies of birdsong lighten my languid soul. The melodic hymn of a rushing stream gladdens me as I stroll. How could not the poet enraptured by such unsullied BLISS, Capture the moment in flowing verse! - He would surely be remiss! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved Placed No. 6 in Word Warrior Challenge Contest

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Date: 4/22/2010 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Robert! I know a winner when I see one...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/19/2010 4:56:00 AM
Mighty well written- Congrats Robert
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:44:00 PM
Lovely imagery in this entry for Andrea's contest Robert. I see why it is in the winner's circle. Congratulations!!!Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:18:00 AM
You took these lovely words and climbed high. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:53:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your sixth place win in my very first contest. You used the words wonderfully. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/14/2010 4:59:00 PM
Good cover, Bob and best luck in the contest. Very well written.
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Date: 4/13/2010 12:36:00 PM
Thanks for the ride on this fantastic trip, Robert!! I can only imagine the scenery that stretch out before you up there! Thanks for sharing this, my friend!! And thanks also for reading and leaving your much appreciated comments for me and Jimmy. ....Peace and love, audrey
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:43:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nicely used the ten words.
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
good write!! enjoyed good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:08:00 PM
Great write again and using the words just so...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:01:00 PM
I agree with Carrie! I felt like I was there hiking up the mountain top. Great poem! The best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:17:00 PM
I feel I am there in the captured moment of bliss....looking out across the Colorado sky!! Lovely poem, Robert! Good luck in the contest!! Love, Carrie
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