Notes About The Poem
These two sonnets reveal the long-term, unseen effects of America's student-debt system, showing how educators and students get caught in a continuous cycle of financial hardship.

American Student Debt Crisis in Two Sonnets

In school we're taught that laws will always last 
Students were told to chase a college dream 
Student debtors hoped their loans would clear fast 
Building a world where knowledge remains free 
 
High schools were praised for high admission rates 
When their grads went to famous colleges 
The government gave loans to fill the gates 
Knowing how the price of school increases 
 
Americans filled campuses with hope 
The colleges raised fees and opened doors 
Loans given with ease, but no way to cope 
Put weight on student debtors evermore 
 
This was a way to tie their futures down, 
Shifting rules, breaking promises pronounced. 
 
Women took out loans for grad school with trust, 
Believing promises their debt would fade 
Teachers worked twenty years in class, fair and just 
Yet, watched their balance grow and not be paid 
 
Their rising debt brought panic to their lives 
They sold her homes and cars to meet the strain 
Two decades teaching earned them money's strife 
And left student debtors with modest gain 
 
She felt trapped like an indentured servant 
Whole interest climbed despite her earnest care 
No matter how much she was diligent 
No money, no path to get her kids there 
 
Why must a teacher tell students to climb 
Weak ladders built on debt for endless time?

End of two sonnets, full stop. 
Shining gold afterthought:
Why encourage kids 
To indenture themselves
 For learning that should be free?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Vaso Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 2:19 AM
Money for bombs not education or medicare, sad!
Sweeney Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 2:46 AM
I would love to see education available for all American citizens! There's so much potential in America!
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