America

Amazing lands that welcome dreams
Manufacturer's of many themes
Ever ending in thought, to people free
Richness in comfort, to her people pray she
Invited us, to live on her lands
Comforted 
All of US
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 5:57 AM
It was the vision of the Pilgrims drawn here by liberty's flame ... O that we all could keep her vision pure. Great write.
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May 4, 2009 at 2:18 PM
What a patriotic reflection. Nice use of the acrostic form. Clever last line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing. Karen
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May 3, 2009 at 10:55 AM
James, I'm smiling...more great work. I love America, too. Keep writing my friend. Love, Dane
Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 10:43 AM
nice thought! Light & Love
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Great acrostic James, I agree with the context...Raul
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