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I see America in majestic mountain ranges, lush vegetation and sandy shores. I see her in gold fields blending into deserts and the Rockies of her Southwest or to her east – melding with green rolling hills, woodlands and lovely lakes. I hear America in children’s voices excited for Halloween or Christmas. I hear her in the busy traffic of her many spacious cities. Or I hear her in the whispers of wind across her plentiful plains. I inhale America’s fragrance in her numerous parks and forests. I inhale whiffs of her food in her vast array of restaurants and bakeries. I revel also in the strong scent of fisherman wharves on her opposite coasts. I taste America in her multi-cultural cuisine served up in numerous eateries. I taste America in my own cooking inspired by traditional foods and by new. I revel in the taste of her movie popcorn where so many others do the same! Finally, I feel America in her diverse climes extending for miles in all directions. I feel America in the warmth of her people when they smile and say hello. Mainly I "feel" America with gratitude for the FREEDOM lives were given for! Dec. 29, 2019 for Carolyn Devonshire's Whitman-Inspired Uplifting Poetry, Old Or New Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/21/2020 8:53:00 PM
Congrats Andrea. Great write about our our home. Peter
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Date: 1/21/2020 1:18:00 PM
What a beautiful, striking tribute this is, Andrea! You write with pride! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/20/2020 5:16:00 PM
Fantastic ode to this great country of ours, Andrea:-) Congratulations on your great win!
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Date: 1/20/2020 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/20/2020 2:35:00 PM
Andrea, you did a wonderful job in your breathtaking description of America. I like the way you "feel" about our beloved country. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2020 2:16:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Congratulations on your second place. I love the way you weave the senses into your vivid imagery of American life. So descriptive! So creative!
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:39:00 PM
Love the way you describe America in the way you see, hear, inhale and taste those things that make it special. And surely, we are grateful for those who fight to ensure our freedom. Great ode, Andrea. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/12/2020 7:45:00 PM
This poem was fantastic! I love how you give the reader access to multiple senses! I felt like I was at Pike's Market smelling fish and the ocean at one point. But ultimately I loved the inhaling of America and the gratitude felt! Beatiful piece! Keep writing!
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Date: 1/11/2020 2:51:00 AM
That is a nice ode. I lived in California as a youngster for a year and still believe it is so beautiful. I need to take of my political glasses every once in a while and just see, hear, inhale and smell. Then I see the beauty. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/5/2020 6:48:00 PM
This covers all the senses and allows readers to feel what it's like to be an American. Great job!
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:29:00 PM
Please look at Kim's comment and know it's what I wanted to say but she had already said it and better.
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Date: 12/31/2019 11:07:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, This is such a great tribute piece for our country. Patriotism at it's finest! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy New Year my friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/31/2019 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful, wonderful, and most appreciated... May not just you're new year be truly blessed, but may every aspect of your life and the lives of those you love be blessed too..
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Date: 12/31/2019 8:08:00 AM
Patriotism through and through. From shore to shore, North to South. In plentiful differences, in its holidays (loved that one), and all the sights, sounds, tastes, smells and touch. Nicely done, Andrea!
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Date: 12/31/2019 12:34:00 AM
I love how you invoke the 5 senses to tell your tale of America. I'm particularly fond of the last two lines. Thank you for putting your patriotism into words for others to enjoy and be enriched by! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 12/30/2019 1:38:00 PM
What a great way to view your country. Blessings for 2020.
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Date: 12/30/2019 9:43:00 AM
Lovely my friend. God Bless your New Year. Ann
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Date: 12/30/2019 7:00:00 AM
Your poem evokes sense of pride for our nation, Andrea. Excellent write that feels uplifting--apt for the contest theme.
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Date: 12/29/2019 9:15:00 PM
wonderfully penned ode to our country Andrea...so much beauty lies within :) hugs
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Date: 12/29/2019 7:24:00 PM
Well done, Andrea, driving the country side from state to state is just beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/29/2019 6:40:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the U. S. A. Andrea, have been about eight times, loved every minute. Happy New year to you and yours. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2019 5:48:00 PM
al ovely tribute to your country Andrea. I'd love to visit again one day:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2019 5:08:00 PM
Andrea, This poem paints a picture of America so well in your Ode. 'I taste America in her multi-cultural cuisine', I can relate to this line as it suits so well. 'Land of the free and home of the brave'. Quoted from Francis Scott Key.
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Date: 12/29/2019 5:01:00 PM
when a young man I hitch-hiked across America and saw it open up once I cleared St Louis into a majestic country everyone should see before they die...good luck in the contest
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