America

Today the USA is 242 years old We are a young country On my bed lays a quilt with American eagles on it It is November 16, 2018 Happy Birthday America! The land of the free The home of the brave So, patrotic! Yes! I like the direction the country is going in

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/23/2019 9:17:00 AM

Susannah, nicely written. My heart aches the direction it is going. Arthur is right Russia also likes the direction it is going.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/23/2019 2:06:00 AM

Russia also likes the direction America is going in, nice write comrade!

Amber Chafer

Date: 1/22/2019 4:06:00 PM

Very positive in a chaotic time! Love it!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/21/2018 11:19:00 PM

A fine patriotic poem, nicely showing luv for your country. Thumbs up. And merry Xmas. Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do check out my newest poem too, I luv greeting poets that way.

Susan Zinn

Date: 11/30/2018 7:27:00 PM

I really liked your work...

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/21/2018 3:23:00 PM

love the positivity of your poetry,,,Harry