Amen
amen- i pray(ed to you for too) long
faces balanced - broken law
broken jaw
[teeny token] spoken out of
turn around - what is
should not be (lost)
found ------------------ crowned crest
the soul is : failed (test the water)
too deep. too much. don't -
[plunge] ------------ touch -
mind : sponge dripping / slipping . ; : . ,
. . , gripping . . .
. hard, the shard .
the scarred shared [can't
(scared)-----(beware) help] but stare
. somewhere .
/ you . are . there /
Copyright © Rachel Hart | Year Posted 2010
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