Amen

amen- i pray(ed to you for too) long
faces balanced - broken law
                         broken jaw
[teeny token]   spoken out of 
                         turn around - what is
should not be                           (lost)
found ------------------ crowned crest
          the soul is : failed (test the water)
                            too deep. too much. don't -
[plunge]                              ------------ touch -
mind : sponge dripping / slipping . ; : . ,
                                                  . . , gripping . . .
                                                  . hard, the shard .
the scarred       shared          [can't
          (scared)-----(beware)       help]      but stare 
                                                           . somewhere .
/ you . are . there /
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Interesting presentation...Sara
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:07 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Rachel. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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