Amber Quill

From amber quill of daylight’s wane,
warmed honey clouds sketch mirrored swells.
  Bronzed seagulls dipped in twilight’s train;
       from amber quill of daylight’s wane.
         In fluttered mass, a golden vein, 
     lifts from the waves in sunset’s spell.
      From amber quill of daylight’s wane,
warmed honey clouds sketch mirrored swells.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Adams Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Nice Triolet, David. Well done.
Merryman Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Lovely imagery, David! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:38 PM
I love the imagery in your poem, David, and your words flow so smooth and dream-like. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:32 PM
DAVID, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
May Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 9:18 AM
This was one of my favorites...Congrats on a great win David...
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 1:12 AM
DAvid, your imagery is splendid in this triolet. the only thing that turned me off was your use of "wane" as a noun in the repeating line. Congratulations, I think this is so pretty!
May Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Awesome write...7
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:56 PM
such a beautiful visual this gives me, enjoyed this one .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 11:47 AM
simply stunning! good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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