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Amber Nights

Amber Nights The streets where I live are soft as rugs, Lamplights of deep amber light them. A lone, orange tabby trots on his way, Nobody yelling to f'ind him. The stars' eyes peek over sleepy trees. The moon lights a white cat asleep on the deck. The waterfall drips happily, On goldfish , so joyful beneath her. 5/28/2019 10pm PST

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Date: 6/2/2019 8:10:00 PM
Lovely done, Panagiota. Fresh, beautiful images. :) gw
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Date: 6/2/2019 8:35:00 PM
Again, thank you..I thought people WOULD snicker at this one. Silly Panagiota
Date: 6/1/2019 4:22:00 PM
I like how you tied in the lonely orange tabby with the goldfish, who was joyful. Two orange beings, one sad, the other amazingly happy. Great contrast!
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:45:00 PM
Thank you... Panagiota. xoxo
Date: 5/31/2019 9:11:00 AM
This is so nice! :)
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Date: 5/31/2019 2:12:00 PM
Heidi...it's exactly how it is here. I am pleased you liked it, as did others. Bless you for reading it Panagiota xoxo
Date: 5/29/2019 2:13:00 PM
Love the panning of the scene! Nicely done, Poet!
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Date: 5/29/2019 2:16:00 PM
Hi, Kim. Gee. I was going to delete it.now glad I did not. Coming to your poetry after I eat. Huggs for sure, PANAGIOTA
Date: 5/29/2019 1:44:00 PM
I see Ann has highlighted the very line and feel I was so moved by. Lovely write Pangagiota! FAV
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Date: 5/29/2019 2:11:00 PM
Hello, how déjà vu, you both chose the same line-))! I was going to erase this Poem. I suffer this problem with almost all of them. Poetry deficiency complex-)) At this point, I prefer to Comnent, than write a thing. I might learn something. A FAV? Really! An honor from someone of your abilities and love of other poets. You, Ann and Mark Tomey made me heavenly happy. Woo-hoo. Bless you all. PANAGIOTA
Date: 5/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
Good Day, Ann and thank you. My mind was a blank. And all of a sudden I recalled how impressed I have been for 15 years since living here! The peace here is ineffable, I wish I could hug it. I was not going to post that. Now you made me glad I did. Again, thank you. Peace be yours, PANAGIOTA
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Date: 5/29/2019 12:48:00 PM
That is so full of beautiful imagery I can almost see and feel the relaxed aura all around your streets 'as soft as rugs' Gorgeous write Panagiota. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/29/2019 12:59:00 PM
See above box Ann. My error. Am a horrid typist Great apologies...xx p.

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