Amber Nectar

The glass she placed down on the table She would have another now, if she were able The pain melted for just a little while This amber liquid could make her smile Her life was spiraling down and down like the drink Round and down, but she thought she would not sink. Inner strength she knew that she possessed Would it save her when she was put to the test? The pains the problems would all dissipate She would show them all, if it wasn’t to late. This amber nectar she knew was just a crutch As the last straw, the drowning man will clutch. The dregs in the glass, they are smiling now Tempting her-fill me once more, you know how. “I make you feel better, most of the time Go on take another sip, it isn’t a crime.” The man at her side put his hot hand on her knee Squeezing it, “I’ll get another in and then we will see.” You get on outside the customers are waiting Get out and work now, there’s no more debating. You will earn what you drink, that’s what you desire This amber nectar is now all you require. You know nothing in this life ever comes free Now get on out there and earn money for me. And with a last sip this saddened lass Drained the now painfully empty beer glass… Entry for the "And with a sip" contest by Paula Swanson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/31/2012 11:08:00 AM
On a similar theme to 'Our Peg' what can one say here, that i have not already said before, only that it reinforces, what a wonderful student of life you are
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:17:00 PM
wow, you really made a story out of this and WHY she was so sad. Most did not do that. GOOD one.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/17/2012 3:43:00 AM
Thans Andy I appreciate your comments xx
Date: 4/8/2012 12:32:00 PM
Happy Easter Mandy to you and yours , always a pleasure to read your work . Love and best wishes and big chocy eggs , Declan xxxx up the nobbers lass ...
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Date: 4/8/2012 2:33:00 AM
Awesome write Mandy luv.. It shows the lengths some people will go to to get their fix.. it also has such sadness to it and life waiting to change.. I get that xxx Hugs
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