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Amber in the wait

Nothing lonelier than being alone in a crowd
standing still in a bustling sea of aliens 
they speak their dialects and look
right through me as if I wasn’t there

Feeling insignificant I don’t belong
and everybody knows it
like an imposter trying to fit in
but wearing the wrong camouflage

I try to merge with oncoming traffic
but they ignore me and won’t let me in
refusing to give me a chance
I am not worthy and they let me know it

Secretly part of me thrives in their ostracism
content that I have made my attempt
that like amber in layers underneath
there is more to be found in silence


Inspired by movie “Lost in Translation”

AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Sometimes I will ask a few people a question or say something with no response…they being apparently lost in the crowd of their thoughts…lol! Lost in translation…our universe to another…sometimes they meet or there is deadly silence or is it bliss…our perspective! Hugs
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Humans are a funny breed ~
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