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Amber Eyes Alert

amber eyes alert summers forest hides the cat... poised to strike its prey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/31/2011 9:50:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Bob. Many congrats on your wins too : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 10:15:00 AM
Thanks much Jack
Date: 10/31/2011 12:26:00 AM
Meooooooow...delicious! Catchy title...striking! A lot of sensory goin' on for this amber eyed cat. Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Gwendolen
Date: 10/30/2011 11:53:00 PM
this is really cool using the amber alert phrase for a cat that also strikes its prey! Me likes!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for stopping in Andrea
Date: 10/30/2011 5:53:00 AM
Very good haiku here Bob.Enjoyed.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 8:25:00 AM
Much appreciated Kash
Date: 10/29/2011 12:12:00 PM
I didn't read far enough down to pick up on the additional criteria. Thanks for the FYI.
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Date: 10/29/2011 12:03:00 PM
Conformist. :-) But I like you anyway. I DO hope your entry places high. Cyndi. PS-- do you know where I can find a lip-zipper? Sigh. One day I need to buy one. Hugs!
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Date: 10/29/2011 11:58:00 AM
Nice use of imagery in this haiku. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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