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Amber Eyes Alert

amber eyes alert
summers forest hides the cat...
poised to strike its prey

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Jack Horne

October 31, 2011 at 9:50 AM

Lovely haiku, Bob. Many congrats on your wins too : )

Bob Quigley

October 31, 2011 at 10:15 AM

Thanks much Jack

Gwendolen Song

October 31, 2011 at 12:26 AM

Meooooooow...delicious! Catchy title...striking! A lot of sensory goin' on for this amber eyed cat. Gwendolen

Bob Quigley

October 31, 2011 at 8:24 AM

Thanks Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2011 at 11:53 PM

this is really cool using the amber alert phrase for a cat that also strikes its prey! Me likes!

Bob Quigley

October 31, 2011 at 8:24 AM

Thanks for stopping in Andrea

Kash Poet

October 30, 2011 at 5:53 AM

Very good haiku here Bob.Enjoyed.

Bob Quigley

October 31, 2011 at 8:25 AM

Much appreciated Kash

Bob Quigley

October 29, 2011 at 12:12 PM

I didn't read far enough down to pick up on the additional criteria. Thanks for the FYI.

Cyndi Macmillan

October 29, 2011 at 12:03 PM

Conformist. :-) But I like you anyway. I DO hope your entry places high. Cyndi. PS-- do you know where I can find a lip-zipper? Sigh. One day I need to buy one. Hugs!

October 29, 2011 at 11:58 AM

Nice use of imagery in this haiku. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

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