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Ambedo Incognito

Trance like state, hypnotic. We melt therein to savour the throb of each offered flavour. Within the time span we are captive to each nuance at play. Softened attention, one with the flow, imbibes each subtle pulse in gentleness. Half the story known, we shift to intent, our response to chosen vibration, determining path of ascent or for that matter, descent. Mind body vaporised, as we be surprised: are we awake or asleep? Where are we? 30-October-2020

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/30/2020 6:01:00 PM

We are one with the universe, one with our Maker, one with ourselves, we are whole.. This piece is so beautifully dreamy, meditative and spiritual, Unseeking Seeker. You bring me to the center of the moment as your second stanza descends to one syllable. Every line to be savored and treasured. Great title and use of the Etheree form. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/30/2020 8:54:00 PM

It's a winner in my book! :))

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/30/2020 8:41:00 PM

Thank you Susan! The word ‘ambedo’ was new to me, so I wrote a few poems on this theme, in different forms. The contest entry is not this one, however. Happy you enjoyed!