Unseeking Seeker Poet Etheree

Ambedo Incognito

Trance
like state,
hypnotic.
We melt therein
to savour the throb
of each offered flavour.
Within the time span we are 
captive to each nuance at play.
Softened attention, one with the flow,
imbibes each subtle pulse in gentleness.

Half the story known, we shift to intent,
our response to chosen vibration,
determining path of ascent
or for that matter, descent.
Mind body vaporised,
as we be surprised:
are we awake
or asleep?
Where are
we?

30-October-2020

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Susan Ashley October 30, 2020 at 6:01 PM We are one with the universe, one with our Maker, one with ourselves, we are whole.. This piece is so beautifully dreamy, meditative and spiritual, Unseeking Seeker. You bring me to the center of the moment as your second stanza descends to one syllable. Every line to be savored and treasured. Great title and use of the Etheree form. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Susan Ashley October 30, 2020 at 8:54 PM It's a winner in my book! :)) Unseeking Seeker October 30, 2020 at 8:41 PM Thank you Susan! The word ‘ambedo’ was new to me, so I wrote a few poems on this theme, in different forms. The contest entry is not this one, however. Happy you enjoyed!