Amazing She Is Part Three

Her eyes are like the stars 
everybody wishes upon.
When I'm in here space, I lost 
the breath I was on.
I stare in her eyes and I swear 
it's forever long.
Her heart beat and mine,beat 
along.
I wonder if we belong?
I know we are young, and 
everything we do is wrong.
I feel like October because I 
been Falling all long.
Let me down easy like a verse 
on a love song-Mario Perez
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 31, 2012 at 1:17 PM
This is a good love poem.
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