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Amazing seeing you

It was amazing seeing you.. Altogether the time passes swiftly by Can you remember the first night When all was silence in the room beneath the broken moon Wishing and remnicing that the pain felt had never been there I miss seeing your bright smile Watching the leaves fall from the divine mountain. Together we danced with the moon and sang with the sun Alas the mortal compass passes time all too soon The leaves on the immortal mountain freeze with the song of chaos Don't you know it was amazing knowing you. Wishing for the dream on the bright moon Dancing with the drunken immortal Hanging onto broken red threads of Lao Yue Even as the paradise crumbles. It was amazing knowing you. All at once a thousand miles a hundred years pass and the the voice I longed for is heard in the silence. At once the immortal palace is rebuild, and the frozen leaves thaw to bloom into the spring.

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