Amazing

The sadness is amazing: How wide its shores, How long its darkness, How high its' cries- How it engulfs me, Pins me to the board, How exacting its' target. Then How right is its moor, Tied to the dock, Settling, No longer breathing, Just staying In its white and gray waves, Just bobbing, sloshing, Staying.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2016 12:47:00 AM

Barbara Boyd, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry---LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2015 1:10:00 AM

Barbara, I like this very much SKAT

Karen Anglesey

Date: 2/3/2014 4:53:00 PM

i am relating to the essence of this right now. Your creativity is so unique and captivating :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/31/2014 5:50:00 AM

Whoa Barbara! Never looked at it like that. You're very right - just looking at sadness and what it manages to accomplish, it can indeed be said to be amazing. I love your perspective. Very well penned!