Amazed

I stand amazed...,
Watching,
Looking at you;
Can't you see me..
Behind those trees of tired 
gaze,
Facing the high towered 
edifice-
Having its abode in the land 
suffused with evil?
Am amazed..
Don't ask me why,
Share not in my amazement 
either...
I would rather spend it alone.
But ask yourself if you are not 
worth this amazement...
And I will let you share my 
cup of grief over evil.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 29, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 9, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Bulus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Bulus, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing .....skat
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