Amazed

I stand amazed..., Watching, Looking at you; Can't you see me.. Behind those trees of tired gaze, Facing the high towered edifice- Having its abode in the land suffused with evil? Am amazed.. Don't ask me why, Share not in my amazement either... I would rather spend it alone. But ask yourself if you are not worth this amazement... And I will let you share my cup of grief over evil.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/29/2024 11:54:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:29:00 AM

Bulus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 5:14:00 PM

Bulus, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing .....skat