Amaryllis

Actually two of them
Were bought
Though quickly one of them died

In a clearance shelf 
At Target
to raise one never tried

The remaining bulb
for five or six years
In varying stages of life

Almost succeeding
In doing it in
by horticulture most blithe

On the porch last summer it
put on two leaves
that were propped up lest they break

In the fall
In a makeshift Greenhouse
to see how much more it could take



Was not prepared for the
hidden surprise
All its deprivation had wrought


Two blossoms 
The size of dessert plates
bold red,my breath it caught.


Never give up
Never say die
however feebly  continue to try


The fruits of
Your labors may supersede
What your expectations belie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 5/8/2022 3:10:00 PM
Never ever give up, unless the horse has died. Horses should never be flogged in the first place. I love this though, "Two blossoms The size of dessert plates bold red, my breath it caught" very beautiful imagery.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 5/8/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thank you .ps. If the horse has died then you strike out on foot.
Date: 5/8/2022 10:41:00 AM
Lovely Vickey. I do love all kinds of flowers and sometimes when you think they have died They will surprise you with a burst of life. Maybe sometimes they just need to rest. Nicely done. God Bess, JB
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 5/8/2022 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Judy.I was telling my sister about it and she said they like cool for the dormancy period and until this year I had brought it into the house over the winter.
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