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Wrapped in death's dark wings, She was at last as the wraiths ... Her true family. ** SECOND PLACE in the "Halloween Senryu" Poetry Contest, Laura Loo, Sponsor. **

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/26/2017 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations! Brilliant.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/27/2017 12:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Frances - much appreciated!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2017 7:40:00 PM

I REALLY loved this one Greg, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2017 10:36:00 PM

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this, Jan, and thank you so much for the kind comment! Blessings, friend! :-) <3

Roy Pett

Date: 10/24/2017 10:37:00 AM

This is a really clever Senryu Gregory, congratulations on your well deserved win. :))

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2017 10:31:00 PM

I greatly appreciate that, Roy, and so appreciate the nice comment! :-)

James Inman

Date: 10/24/2017 7:36:00 AM

Forever in death. Great use of words Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2017 10:30:00 PM

Many kind thanks, James! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 7:18:00 AM

Spooky! Congrats! <3 Kim

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2017 10:29:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Kim! <3

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2017 5:40:00 AM

great senryu dear Greg! and like on Eve's senryu I learned 2 new words on yours! thank you and congrats :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/25/2017 10:28:00 PM

Oh, you are very sweet, Laura, thank you so much! I am in love with words, not as a way to sound "deep" or articulate, but as new ways to create phrases and rhythm and say the same things in fresh ways. Walt Whitman did that to exquisite ends, and I just adore it! Blessings and I am honored for the placement! :-)