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Amanda and the Dog

Amanda went for a walk She didn't want to jay walk Along the way she meta dog So she bent down to pet it Then she spoke some kind words Gently she said to the dog " Why are you following me"? The dog said"I have no home" "So instead I have to roam "Can you help me?" "You see I need a home To keep me warm and dry" "Can I come with you, to stay?" "Hey thats okay ,we can live together Now they are happy to have each other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/27/2017 5:01:00 PM
You have a grate new friend.No excuse to be lonely now.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/27/2017 6:11:00 PM
Hello Alfred,yes I have a good friend there is no reason to be lonely. now. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 3/10/2017 2:57:00 PM
This poem warmed the heart of this dog lover. Your poem had a rhythmical rhyme that appealed to me too.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Janet,all dogs needs homes. This poem I wrote made me happy.
Date: 2/12/2017 11:30:00 AM
- How sweet poem, Darlene :) - I have three dogs :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:24:00 PM
Hello Sunshine that stray dog needed a home. Amanda gave the dog a home.
Date: 2/10/2017 2:43:00 PM
Darlene: Any kindness to a dog, warms my heart. I have a wealth friend that started feeding feral cats in 2008 after our "big flood". He now has so many, he found it necessary to hire a lady to take the afternoon feeding run. Yours was a lovely tale. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. keep it up. oldbuck
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Strays cats and dogs need alll the help they can get.In any time of the year.
Date: 2/2/2017 7:27:00 PM
Sweet story Darlene, my friend! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Jack Love and hugs to you to.
Date: 1/31/2017 7:40:00 PM
Now this was a happy poem. I loved it. I wish I could take every stray dog in that I see, but I can't. Nice one Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:29:00 PM
I wish also that I could take cats and dogs that re strays and keep them all.

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