Kadi Amine Poet ABC

Amagic Rose

A beautiful magic rose
hypnotized my eyes
I can't move them or close...

Among the flowers so far
I'm smelling it now
but i want its nectar..

It's harder little bit
to reach my magic rose
than to observe it...

I dream to have just two wings
and i know most of people
are dreaming to be kings...

I wish i were a bee
I can fly to my rose
that's all what i hope to be...

Stay in its heart and live there
leave all for one day
or eternity , i don't care ...

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Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2016 at 12:16 AM enjoying this a second time. LINDA

Seun Ogedengbe November 26, 2013 at 2:33 AM Welcome to Poetrysoup. Keep up the poetic writing

Skat A November 24, 2013 at 12:08 AM Kadi, , , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Kadi Amine November 24, 2013 at 8:05 AM Hi ,Skat .I'm really happy to be one of your friends and among this nice community .Well...I'm a man from Algeria ..I teach french and I love english language ...I've been writting poems since i was 10..Now I'm 49years..I'm Married with 4 children ..I'm here to learn and I hope to find what i'm searching ..lol...Take care Mrs Kat .

Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2013 at 1:42 PM - Welcome to P-Soup, Kadi ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :) Kadi Amine November 24, 2013 at 8:12 AM Hi,Anne ! thanks for reading my poem. I have to read the others' ones I know ,inorder to get a large knowledge about how select the sweetable words for a better poem ...Take care Mrs Anne ...Hope see you here !

Poet Destroyer A November 23, 2013 at 1:34 PM Kadi, ., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Kadi Amine November 24, 2013 at 8:20 AM Hi,Linda !I'm really happy to appreciate my first contact with you....Mean your poetic community lol... Of course I will visit your contest and I hope learning more and more ...Take care Mrs Linda !