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Amadeus

When will you admit defeat. How many have you beguiled with words of honey flowing through lips deceiving. He has said the child may choose how it confronts its demons. Oh, Amadeus, where are you, Captain of the Legions of Satan? Show yourself to me. Come under my scrutiny. Can I fight you for the souls of my dear departed in your grasp? I weep but can not help. Show yourself Satan and have me at your mercy. I am covered in the love of he who cast you out. I am washed in the fountain of waters of forgiveness. You can never take my choice from me. You will never understand the precept of free will. Without it my faith would be nothing. I know that I need not be perfect, but He expects my best. His commandments are hard but I am willing and earnest. The law can not be altered. From a path of despair, compassion lifted God to holiness. Eternity swells with pride as I strive up the ladder toward light. But neither God nor your master makes me take even one step up or one step down. If this were not so where would be the greatness in my action at the completion of my journey. I have lived the life. He has asked me in and I have come home. Oct. 1 2010 Charles Henderson for Deb's b/c contest "before Christ" man was on a more personal level with God and satan

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Date: 8/24/2011 1:53:00 PM
First of all, congrats on a deeply spiritual write. I celebrate all that this poem means for you...a great testimony of your free will. My fav line is--eternity swells with pride as I strive up the ladder toward light. I am thankful that I am not a puppet too! Wonderful write, friend. Gwendolen-
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Date: 8/24/2011 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your 3rd place win in the contest .Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/24/2011 1:53:00 AM
love must have overflowed before Christ, moe.. then, we made love into a man-made religion... a searing, reflective write that flows with your own personal relationship with God.. CONGRATS with hugggs! :)
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Date: 8/24/2011 12:16:00 AM
This sure is a very intriguing write, Charles, and so beautifully written! I really enjoyed reading this--super congrats on your win :)!
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Date: 8/23/2011 11:26:00 PM
This is indeed amazing. Many congrats sir for this win.
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Date: 8/23/2011 6:52:00 PM
cocky and humble at the same time... a VERY difficult combination to pull off! WTG, Charles!
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your wonderful winning poem in the contest with this extraordinary entry luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:37:00 PM
So beautiful is this, Charles....beauty and reverence. A wonderful winning poem it is. Congratulations are deserved. ...Carrie
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:48:00 PM
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:06:00 AM
An impassioned write! Very rainy & wet here! Hope you and your's are dry. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:58:00 AM
good morning Charles!! Enjoyed reading your work today... have the dears been bad lately? they are always eating my flowers and vegetables!
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:46:00 AM
Smile Charles ... outstanding poem ... going to my favourites love Jayne
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