Am Soft, Petal Soft

am soft, petal soft
no she is soft, cloud soft,
how do i know i am soft?
she asked,
you touch me well,
carress me well as always
and you mentioned it,
how do i knw you are soft,
i wanna touch you.
 
am soft, petal soft,
no she is soft,cloud soft.
your eyes are lovely she said,
no yours are heavenly i said,
how do i know she asked,
i watch the sunrise in them,
i replied.
how do u know, i asked,
i see my world in you she replied.
 
am soft, petal soft.
no she is soft cloud soft,
i love your lips she said,
no i love yours i said
why she asked,
coz they taste like strawberry i said,
why i asked,
i cant get enough of them she said.
 
am soft petal soft,
no she is soft cloud soft. . .
 
 
...... am Jim also Sadaat. . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful, full of emotion and tenderness.
Comporozos Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 3:56 AM
Nice and tender work!
Austin Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 9:55 AM
Beautiful, sensitive stuff, Jim. Congrats on the selection. daver
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