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Am See /At the Lake

Am See tanzt das Schilf Spähend ein Fischreiher im Baum Absuchend das Wasser Nebel hält den See gefangen Ein Fischer birgt seinen Fang ------------------------------------- The reeds are dancing A heron on watch from a tree Searching the lake's brink Fog captivates the quiet lake A fisherman secures his catch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/23/2010 8:43:00 AM
How great to paint a picture involving all these little pieces of the whole!
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Date: 4/19/2010 10:01:00 AM
very very nice I love your tankas and thank you for all of your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/19/2010 7:53:00 AM
my shape poem was suppose to be an IRis. I know it was not great.
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:54:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Gert. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:11:00 PM
Very beautiful on the top without the bottom form I would hav eno idea. Still so beautiful the top write, Ian so glad you added it to the post. Nice imagination on the fisherman ...IRMA
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:10:00 PM
enjoyed--I do some art work my self. I need to get back at it.
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:39:00 PM
You have a talent, I can not imagin to be good as your self. Both are excellent. Nice one,P.D.
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Date: 4/18/2010 6:48:00 AM
Brilliant imagery, Gert. I see this many times while fishing in the early morning. This one goes to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:11:00 AM
Excellent write that is very descriptive, emotive, and captiviting....Keep the creative pen flowing...I especially like the end line..Thanks so much for stopping by and wishing me well in the contest..That was a picture that could draw all kinds of conclusions even from just one person...Sara
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