Am I Sacred

I want to write a poem about idolizing someone
When you idolize someone, know this
God will never let you two be close to each other
As He will always have first place
You will see that nothing you do
can bring you two together
He will put a wedge between you and that person
So you can never say I worship the ground you walk on
God is like that 
When you put someone on a pedestal
He will knock it down
And make sure you learn the hard truth
So don't do it my friend
Don't worship someone
Only God you will worship
That is all I want to say about that
So you can like me
Just don't worship me, okay? 
Lol comprende?

Inspired by reading a member's poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/2/2014 10:03:00 AM
:) See you then. have a nice day...PD
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:17:00 AM
LOL, Yeah, I guess I have nothing better to do
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/2/2014 9:41:00 AM
Lol
Date: 9/2/2014 8:57:00 AM
I will have a great day
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/2/2014 9:00:00 AM
Lol :)
Date: 9/2/2014 8:48:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 9/2/2014 8:51:00 AM
My pleasure. Have a great day, Linda :)
Date: 8/23/2014 7:04:00 PM
Toquen; This is so true. Our God don't us to put anyone before him. He should always be first in our lives. Thanks for sharing this today... Lucilla
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/23/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thanks, Lucilla. Yes! Love ya :)
Date: 8/19/2014 6:51:00 PM
Hello my friend, nice Free Verse read. John 4:24 .... Peace to you always, Ken
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/19/2014 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Ken. Yes :)
Date: 8/16/2014 6:29:00 PM
entiendo
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/16/2014 6:34:00 PM
Great, Jerry! Had to google that word lol
Date: 8/16/2014 3:23:00 PM
- Wise words found in this poem, Toquyen !!! - Very well written! - Happy weekend! - Read my little prayer - posted today:) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/16/2014 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! I will. You too :)
Date: 8/16/2014 7:10:00 AM
Always great to see you cuddle bunny. you one wonderful girl. damn pretty too. A ray of sunshine to brighten our day. best wishes. Peterkins.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/16/2014 7:15:00 AM
Lol. You always know what to say. Well, sunshine is the forecast in your area haha
Date: 8/16/2014 6:42:00 AM
All people are born equal , it's true they shouldn't be worshipped. we can have admiration, we all have our favourites. people ca take things too far. Loved Michael Jackson, but some fans treated him as holly. Like Demetrios has said. the creator should come first. Take care Pete.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/16/2014 6:55:00 AM
Yes. Thanks, Pete! Glad to see you this Saturday :)
Date: 8/16/2014 5:13:00 AM
Yes, my dear Toquyen, worshiping someone in the place of God constitutes a form of blaspheme and of hubris. The created should never be placed over the creator.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/16/2014 5:19:00 AM
Yes, thanks, Demetrios! Love ya. :)
Date: 8/15/2014 10:07:00 AM
praises for this riveting yet grounded write, toguyen... we know who to give glory to.. fine read.. huggs
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/15/2014 10:14:00 AM
Thanks, Nette! It's Toquyen. People keeps missing it lol. Love ya
Date: 8/14/2014 10:58:00 PM
Toquyen, interesting, and fun to read.... I will only worship God :) Love Linda
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/14/2014 11:57:00 PM
Yes, only! Thanks, Linda :)
Date: 8/12/2014 6:06:00 AM
No compredno ,.loco.,.. Lol
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/12/2014 6:31:00 AM
Lol, my spell check won't let me put the Spanish word in! Okay Tim
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