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Am I On the Right Path

Travelling through the pristine path, which has very few foot prints, and knowing that it is a risky footpath; Help me through or give me a hint; Am I on the right path? Despite the relentless hindrance, and amidst all the hatred, I traversed a pretty long distance, Tell me before I get faded, Am I on the right path? With mind full of inexplicable chaos and heart full of concealed torment I bow before you, Show me an oasis, adjudge my unanswered lament and tell me, Am I on the right path?

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Date: 12/21/2017 6:49:00 AM
Hi Supraja. I love the expression in this poem and I know I can identify with times like this. Well written :)
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Date: 12/21/2017 5:47:00 AM
yes ... we see you ... we are here waving this flag ... is that you elizabeth ... ha ha ... uhm ... oh ... that was Sanford and sons elizabeth ... really like the view that your write enabled the reader to digest ... the questioning is a very relatable piece for this reader ... really like the way this molded me ... yes ... indeed too ...
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Date: 12/20/2017 3:08:00 PM
- All we can is to have hope and faith ... and do the best we can - Lovely written, Supraja :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:09:00 AM
Deep write, no one really knows if it is the right path until the outcome... well expressed...
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Date: 12/20/2017 10:35:00 AM
Hi Supraja...your need for assurance can be felt throughout each line. We can only do the best we can. Faith and good, honest intentions will guide you along the right path, despite the doubts and obstacles! Best regards // paul
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