Supraja Kannan Poet Free verse

Am I On the Right Path

Travelling through the pristine path,
     which has very few foot prints,
and knowing that it is a risky footpath;
  Help me through or give me a hint;
       Am I on the right path?

Despite the relentless hindrance,
  and amidst all the hatred,
I traversed a pretty long distance,
    Tell me before I get faded,
      Am I on the right path?

With mind full of inexplicable chaos
    and heart full of concealed torment
I bow before you, Show me an oasis,
      adjudge my unanswered lament
   and tell me, Am I on the right path?

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Heidi Sands December 21, 2017 at 6:49 AM Hi Supraja. I love the expression in this poem and I know I can identify with times like this. Well written :)

Pipping Stars December 21, 2017 at 5:47 AM yes ... we see you ... we are here waving this flag ... is that you elizabeth ... ha ha ... uhm ... oh ... that was Sanford and sons elizabeth ... really like the view that your write enabled the reader to digest ... the questioning is a very relatable piece for this reader ... really like the way this molded me ... yes ... indeed too ...

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2017 at 3:08 PM - All we can is to have hope and faith ... and do the best we can - Lovely written, Supraja :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One December 20, 2017 at 11:09 AM Deep write, no one really knows if it is the right path until the outcome... well expressed...

Paul Callus December 20, 2017 at 10:35 AM Hi Supraja...your need for assurance can be felt throughout each line. We can only do the best we can. Faith and good, honest intentions will guide you along the right path, despite the doubts and obstacles! Best regards // paul