Am I My Brothers Keeper

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

if the one issue is murder,
murder’s number one,
let’s ignore “the truth”

“put on this blindfold
listen to my soothing words.
i’m your mama.
no, i’m not pulling your leg.

don’t look at the man behind the curtain
nor the puppeteer.
ignore the split; pretend
it’s a banana split, all pretty.

put a bow on it.
don’t worry; you don’t need to look.”
look the other way.
traffic’s coming;
but it’s not you who gets “hit”

mothers, fathers, brothers, sisters, in-laws
missing from the family line.
who cares for those lumped
into a heap of parts;
parts for sale

sell the koolaid
in all its  l-o-v-e-l-y  hues —
choose is the flavor of the day

obey the almighty parade
of fame and fortune

the “sacrifices” don’t even warrant
a burial plot

1/24/2021

Then the Lord said to Cain, Where is your brother Abel?”
“I don’t know,” he replied. “Am I my brother’s keeper?”
The LORD SAID, “What have you done? LISTEN!
Your brother’s blood cries out to me from the ground.”

Genesis 4:9-10 NIV
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 1/28/2021 2:05:00 PM
...nicely writ write...(to quote a certain someone) on the meaning of innocence ....of/as a reality.....'one is as both snake and dove'....with respect the nature of the truth that surrounds one is concerned....as is in buddhism...to learn 'cause behind an effect' means no assumptions.....stan sand
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thank you. Yes definitely a cause b’hind an effect.
Date: 1/24/2021 5:23:00 PM
I hope poets realize what you are talking about. It's not Covid for heavens sake. I do. The body parts are still being found in garages acrosee the USA. Imagine ...you would wonder...is that my child in a garage somewhere? Such a ghoulish thought, Kim. Or to be really truthful, the Mom should be paid for all parts sold. Ghoulish but true. PP cops the money. Dr. Mengele Clinics. God help us all...well written. Perfect ending from the Word! a fav. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2021 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie! I guess it is a mindset. If people had to look at a pile of bones they’d see the atrocity.
Date: 1/24/2021 12:31:00 PM
Too expensive to die... a burial plot is a luxury...might have to burn...We must heed caution where caution is due...Nice one
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2021 5:54:00 PM
The aborted don’t get to be buried.
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