Fire Bird Poet Rhyme

Am I Good Enough?

Misty sky,
All a lie,
Terrible past,
Trauma will last,
Forever stressed,
Feeling never blessed,
Praying to God,
I always feel odd,
Left out,
Self-doubt,
Self-conscious and worried,
But the stress is buried,
So, no-one can see,
The inside me,
A mess of anxiety,
Am I good enough for society?

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Darrell Rose December 5, 2023 at 12:24 AM I enjoyed the flow of this work. Nice choice of words and phrasing to a relatable sentiment so many feel at various times of our lives. Well done. Fire Bird December 16, 2023 at 3:09 PM Thank you, Darrell, I understand that many people go through a time like this in their lives. - Phoenix :)

Diane Perna November 13, 2023 at 3:18 PM You have so many lovely poems, I enjoyed reading them! I can relate to this one and many others, great details and writing! Fire Bird November 14, 2023 at 11:45 AM Thanks Diane!! Thats really nice of you, I try and make my poems relatable. - Phoenix :)

Aly Bahr October 17, 2023 at 12:25 AM You are a beautiful person, never doubt that lovely. The standards of the world are not for you, you are so much better than that. Fire Bird October 17, 2023 at 12:26 AM Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comment!!! - Phoenix :)

Susan Mills October 9, 2023 at 3:18 AM I never want for society to forget about me. I always want to be remembered. I guess that is why I am a writer and poet. Your poem is actually quite refreshing. Thank you! Fire Bird October 9, 2023 at 12:55 PM Hi Susan, thank you for the comment!! I am sure you will be remembered. - Phoenix

Karen Jones September 30, 2023 at 7:02 PM Yes you are to answer the question. Enjoyed the rhyme. Fire Bird September 30, 2023 at 7:03 PM Hi Karen, thank you for the comment, and answering the question. - Phoenix :)