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Am I Good Enough?

Misty sky, All a lie, Terrible past, Trauma will last, Forever stressed, Feeling never blessed, Praying to God, I always feel odd, Left out, Self-doubt, Self-conscious and worried, But the stress is buried, So, no-one can see, The inside me, A mess of anxiety, Am I good enough for society?

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Darrell Rose

Date: 12/5/2023 12:24:00 AM

I enjoyed the flow of this work. Nice choice of words and phrasing to a relatable sentiment so many feel at various times of our lives. Well done.

Fire Bird
Date: 12/16/2023 3:09:00 PM

Thank you, Darrell, I understand that many people go through a time like this in their lives. - Phoenix :)

Diane Perna

Date: 11/13/2023 3:18:00 PM

You have so many lovely poems, I enjoyed reading them! I can relate to this one and many others, great details and writing!

Fire Bird
Date: 11/14/2023 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Diane!! Thats really nice of you, I try and make my poems relatable. - Phoenix :)

Aly Bahr

Date: 10/17/2023 12:25:00 AM

You are a beautiful person, never doubt that lovely. The standards of the world are not for you, you are so much better than that.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/17/2023 12:26:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comment!!! - Phoenix :)

Susan Mills

Date: 10/9/2023 3:18:00 AM

I never want for society to forget about me. I always want to be remembered. I guess that is why I am a writer and poet. Your poem is actually quite refreshing. Thank you!

Fire Bird
Date: 10/9/2023 12:55:00 PM

Hi Susan, thank you for the comment!! I am sure you will be remembered. - Phoenix

Writing Muse

Date: 9/30/2023 8:16:00 PM

So deep,meaningful and relatable! I absolutely loved the rhyme and yes,you are enough and will always be loved <3

Fire Bird
Date: 9/30/2023 8:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouraging comment!! - Phoenix :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/30/2023 7:02:00 PM

Yes you are to answer the question. Enjoyed the rhyme.

Fire Bird
Date: 9/30/2023 7:03:00 PM

Hi Karen, thank you for the comment, and answering the question. - Phoenix :)