Am I Dreaming

AM I DREAMING
Momentarily, I stop and freeze 
every worldly movement and 
activity. As I consume myself 
into each one of them I ask 
myself, ‘am I dreaming?’ my 
mind moves to and fro the 
realm of imaginations and 
thoughts laboriously 
endeavoring to overhaul its 
wondrous question, ‘am I 
dreaming?’ 
I slice myself off reality, while 
floating in space my mind 
engulfs reality and all earthly 
entities and puts them under 
ratiocination I still hear a voice 
whispering from within my 
head, ‘am I dreaming?’ 
I then start to analyze all 
environments and focus only on 
those preponderating. I look 
and penetrate my eyes through 
impenetrable penetrations, and 
I begin to see, ‘is this realistic?’ 
I ask myself. 
I see blameless bloodshed, I 
see sin in its whole ugliness 
pouring out of people’s mouths, 
I see envy in people’s eyes, I 
see extravagancy, and I see 
impoverishment and its twin: 
penury.
I stand still and maintain 
silence, I hear a roaring noise, 
and I ask myself what it is. It is 
heavy blustering winds both 
from east to west and west to 
east acting as a transportation 
medium for sinful noises, I hear 
ill words from the east, I hear 
blasphemous voices from the 
west, and I hear 
misconceptions.
I hear and see offensive insults 
and figures respectively, they 
shake my whole body vigorously 
and I feel like waking up 
abruptly because of the terror 
and horror in my dream. Am I 
dreaming? 
Alva kanyika - 
alvakanyika@gmail.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/14/2013 7:12:00 PM
Alva, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:09:00 AM
what a sweet way of introducing yrself.. i love how one line makes platform to the other,,,, beautiful words pened,,,
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Date: 8/24/2013 9:15:00 AM
Hello Alva, wow.. I love it!. Your first poem on the soup is excellent and fun for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:10:00 AM
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Date: 8/24/2013 5:02:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Alva! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2013 4:54:00 AM
Good morning Alva, deep. I very much enjoyed the reality of life in this piece, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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