Am I Beautiful

“Am I beautiful?“
She asked.

Listen to the birds.
They sing for you.
The songs they carry.
In the soft wind.
That is your beauty.

A river.
With it’s fierce blue rapids.
All of that life.
In Complicated waters.
That is your beauty. 

The mountains. 
With their highs of highs.
Sunlit valleys.
Nature laying it all out. 
That is your beauty.

The heavens.
Where worlds shimmer
and planets burst into 
the rarest splendor. 
That is your beauty 

“Yes my darling you are truly beautiful”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Nicole Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 1:39 PM
You have created a masterpiece here. Comparing her beauty with the beauty of nature. I like how you place "That is your beauty" after each thought. She asked if she was beautiful and you responded in such an amazing way. :) Brandy
Clark Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Thank you
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