Am I An Ant

I was wondering by a tree,
if the ants worship God? Or they just drived by chemical stimuli in their nervous system
Am I an ant?

She had the 8th ****** in 30 minutes. My ***** was in flames, it felt like millions of little angles dig their fingernails inside
She was so pure that she was the Devil. Silence. Lack of satisfaction

Everything is connected, wake up to your own death, crying
It was urine all over me

She's awake

the Earth is dying
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Agustin Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 5:57 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 9:56 PM
sorry to read you wake up covered in urine. ---skat
Kiss Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 4:45 AM
it wasn't mine, it was she squirting...
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May 3, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Bence, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 2, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Bence, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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May 1, 2016 at 8:16 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Bence. :)
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May 1, 2016 at 7:22 AM
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