Am I An Ant

I was wondering by a tree, if the ants worship God? Or they just drived by chemical stimuli in their nervous system Am I an ant? She had the 8th ****** in 30 minutes. My ***** was in flames, it felt like millions of little angles dig their fingernails inside She was so pure that she was the Devil. Silence. Lack of satisfaction Everything is connected, wake up to your own death, crying It was urine all over me She's awake the Earth is dying

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2024 5:57:00 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:56:00 PM

sorry to read you wake up covered in urine. ---skat

Bence Kiss
Date: 5/4/2016 4:45:00 AM

it wasn't mine, it was she squirting...

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:55:00 PM

Bence, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/2/2016 12:18:00 AM

Bence, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.

Moon Flower

Date: 5/1/2016 8:16:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Bence. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2016 7:22:00 AM

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