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Am getting old yet heart’s aglow Bliss thunder throbs within Way of life, tranquil stillness slow Wrinkles adorn my skin Mind not life scars and pain Now, no bondage, no chain As wisdom, I ingrain My hands feel cold Am getting old 14-January-2022 Quietus

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Date: 1/14/2022 8:02:00 PM
How beautifully you have summed up the pain of old age, yet keeps the ember of life alive that can be blown into a flame. Lovely !
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Date: 1/14/2022 10:51:00 PM
Absolutely! Thanks for dropping by, Valsa
Date: 1/14/2022 9:15:00 AM
Simply lovely...but, oh my, aren't we all!
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Date: 1/14/2022 10:51:00 PM
And yet heart is vibrant!
Date: 1/14/2022 8:45:00 AM
Really lovely U.S and I can relate! Well written. Debx
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Date: 1/14/2022 10:50:00 PM
Kind of creeps up on us slowly, doesn’t it?

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