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Always With Me

As I wake up in the morning the commercial that he thinks is oh so funny is watching me. I smile as i think he's always with me. As i get half way to work the song on the radio he has recited to me. i'm riding past the car he wants if it was in him means. he's always with me Im at work for an hour and the first client I get has his last name, although it was not spelled the same. He's always with me. i am sitting in the window wondering if it will rain, suddenly I get a text on my phone," I just wanted to say your name" He always with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2016 4:47:00 AM
Val, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:09:00 AM
Val Clifton, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/18/2010 11:34:00 AM
this is a niice poem!..just continue reading poetry with an open mind and as far as writing goes...keep up wat you are doing and try not to get caught up in forcing subjects or styles you seem to already hold a purity in your writing so go with it..most great poetry has little involvement from our minds so just follow your heart!
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:19:00 AM
I love to read poetry although im not familiar with the formates and so-on. any suggestions on how i can improve my knowledge?
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