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I met him while walking, and the coffee shop- soon we were talking. He was a friendly man, and our friendship began. On nice days we ran, while running he listened- I was babbling. Telling my life story, he was older but handsome and brainy. A storyteller too, we fit like an old shoe. His blue eyes were see-through, in those eyes I saw a soul of beauty. And soon we were holding hands, our new relationship had no demands. I just accepted love, and saw red hearts above. I was his ladylove, he kissed me- I wanted to do headstands. Then, he told me something, his job was moving- come with me darling. I was sad and broken, filled with dark depression. Could I, my own life shun, when we meet- my heart is left bleeding. __________________________ December 9, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/Always In My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 17-9698-18-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Age Doesn't Matter When You're In Love sponsor, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Fourth Place

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Date: 12/18/2017 9:42:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations, BW!
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Date: 12/18/2017 2:43:00 PM
Hi BW, Nice take on the contest theme. Such a sad ending. Congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2017 5:24:00 AM
BW, you've given vigour and vitality to love with these beautiful lines. Best wishes in the contest, Adeniji.
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Date: 12/9/2017 4:19:00 PM
An enthralling write Broken Wings. You captured my attention from the first line and held it captivated all the way through. Beautifully written. Good luck.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:23:00 PM
Sad one! Sounds like a true story?
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Date: 12/9/2017 12:58:00 PM
- A beautiful friendship with feelings ... but a sad ending, B.W. - Take the chance, let your heart decide - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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